help with title and summary

[Lynne Lee]

I'd really appreciate some input.

How can I improve this title and summary so that more people click through to read the article?

Feeling Good - The Easiest Way To Feel Good More of the Time

To change your life you need to change how you feel. How you feel about things changes everything. If you want to feel good more of the time, read on...

Looking forward to your input,

Thanks

Lynne

www.christianlifecoaching.co.uk

[Nanci Biddle]

Hi Lynne,
Here is my suggestion: Feeling Great-How to feel Great most of the time.

As I was reading your article “When God seems silent”, it brought to mind “When God seems distant, who moved?” We know it wasn’t God.

Hope this is helpful.

[Lynne Lee]

Thanks Nancy -helpful on both counts

[Lee Wise]

I'm not good at this at all... but before I turn in here are some quick thoughts::

Feel Well - Live Well: Creating The Ride Of Your Life!
Don't you just love how you live when the feeling's right? Discover simple, doable steps of action for loving how you feel while improving how feel about living.

Feel Well - Live Well: Moving Forward With The Art Of Living

[Lynne Lee]

Thanks for the input Lee - I think there's a copywriter lurking inside you!

[Lee Wise]

Well, I certainly don't know about a copywriter but I'm glad you like it, LOL!

[Lee Wise]

Say... just a curiosity question: what did you come up with concerning a title?

[Lynne Lee]

Lee by the time I got your input I'd already tweaked the Title - I used Nanci's sugestion, keeping the article recognisable.

Feeling Great - The Easiest Way To Feel Great Most of the Time

How you feel about things changes everything. If you want to feel great more of the time, read on...

This article is my worst in terms of views, it's only had 38 and yet it's been picked up 5 times.
I decided to cut my losses and spend my energies on new articles. I think the key is to not rush to submit but to leave articles for 24 hours before submitting and look with fresh eyes the next day.

My best so far has had 515 views and been picked up 12 times.

I have an article that's had 273 views yet been picked up 24 times.

I'm learning that some topics naturally attract more views.

Thanks for asking

[Lee Wise]

Yes, one of the suggestions I had a long time ago from an online friend of mine in his ebook Ezine Marketing Machine, Rick Beneteau, said not (I really think he said "never") publish directly after you write an article. And, if I remember correctly, he said to wait 24 hours. I've always been better when I've followed his advice on that. Although, I can say that I've just got it done to reach a deadline and simply published.

The best as you continue writing,

Lee

P.S. And, in case you were wondering... he really is an online personal friend. A great guy who has strong desire to be a positive influence in the world. I'd Google his name and check out his other sites.

[Lynne Lee]

iThanks Lee, I'll follow that up.
I tiook my own advice and waited 24 hours before submitting my last article - It's worth it, fresh eyes do spot things than can be improved. I don't recommend tweaking forever though or you'll be where I was before discovering Jeff's seminars and rarely submit anything!